I think the background in the second piece needs a little bit more love. Maybe add more defining shadows to plays the trees or maybe a horizon line and a sky? I think you need to push your darks more as well. The mirror is kind of blending in with the branches of the trees in the background. Maybe you could include the persons shadow on the ground to give her placement in the piece. I think the top piece depicts your concentration well. The silhouettes are used nicely in the water and the lighter trees in the background give it some depth. I don't have any criticism for that one :)
I agree with Lindsey on the second piece. It seems a little two dimensional, maybe the trees in the back need more of a grounding because it seems like where the sky might be blends into the ground. Maybe the picture doesn't do it justice and I just can't see it as well. I like the first one cause it has good contrast and how the light looks like it comes through the trees. And I like the idea of the second one, looks like a dream or something
The first piece works nicely with your concentration and i think its well done. The sky is blended well with the different shades of blue. The second piece is interesting, but like them i agree that i needs a little more something. you have the foreground and middleground, but no backround. I like the color though, it stands out.
I think the background in the second piece needs a little bit more love. Maybe add more defining shadows to plays the trees or maybe a horizon line and a sky? I think you need to push your darks more as well. The mirror is kind of blending in with the branches of the trees in the background. Maybe you could include the persons shadow on the ground to give her placement in the piece. I think the top piece depicts your concentration well. The silhouettes are used nicely in the water and the lighter trees in the background give it some depth. I don't have any criticism for that one :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with Lindsey on the second piece. It seems a little two dimensional, maybe the trees in the back need more of a grounding because it seems like where the sky might be blends into the ground. Maybe the picture doesn't do it justice and I just can't see it as well. I like the first one cause it has good contrast and how the light looks like it comes through the trees. And I like the idea of the second one, looks like a dream or something
ReplyDeleteThe first piece works nicely with your concentration and i think its well done. The sky is blended well with the different shades of blue. The second piece is interesting, but like them i agree that i needs a little more something. you have the foreground and middleground, but no backround. I like the color though, it stands out.
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